You Will Make It Out Alive

Darkness cannot hold you forever, you can, like I did... escape from its hold. Suicide shouldn't be the only option, its a choice, don't choose it... choose to live! You will make it out alive!

There is a light at the end of the tunnel.

You may not be able to see it now but it is there.

All the pain, all the tears,

The scars inside,

There is an end.

You will reach it one day…

Stop thinking about the easy way out,

Pain doesn't hurt if it’s all you’ve ever felt.

Try to close your eyes and step back from the ledge.

It’s harder for the scars to heal if they keep reopening.

The darkness doesn’t hold you,

Light does…

It will come and save you one day,

You’re not finished in this world,

You will make it out alive.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Very inspirational, I loved it. I'm glad that you encourage people not to end it and to actually reach out and leap for the light at the end.
" The darkness doesn't hold you, Light does... " Wonderful line! Those are my favourite words in the whole poem, and this whole poem is beautiful.
Lovely write, keep it up!

[MoriartyMesa]

You will reach it one day…

Stop thinking about the easy way out,

Pain doesn't hurt if it’s all you’ve ever felt.




F*****g brutal, nice job. Right cross on the portside if I may say.

[Wolfwind]

I really enjoyed the positive and uplifting nature of your words here. It's good that people can see that there is indeed a choice and there is always light that will embrace them, if they simply take that foot step, rather than one towards the negative side.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Archia]

I enjoyed the message in it and you expressed it in a powerful way.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

WOW!WOW!WOW! I love this!

[Robert Malcom]

I love this, I can't believe how many writing I keep running into that are incredible. I look foreward to any future poems from you