Falling

Falling

A Poem by Sugar and Spice

I'm gonna fall now,
and if I fall I'm gonna fall far.
My feet no longer have the strength to carry me, 
My tears are falling.
If only I were a bird, 
Then I could spread my wings and be free of this world.
My heart cannot bare the pain,
Inside the scars you made are breaking.
Why is there no rewind button?
Why can't I go back to the start and walk away?
If your plan was to hurt me, well done you suceeded,
You must be so proud.
You knocked the breath out of me,
You made me feel alive.
I'm gonna go now, I really am,
Nothing you can say can make this better.
I need to dry my cheeks and move on.
You tore me from the inside,
And for that I am gone.

© 2011 Sugar and Spice


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It's another painful write, love's floating in the piece but the pain... ! The pain's too surviving in the write in you. Anybody who does love always get some hurt once a time it's a piece and i got the feel of it, that's what i got from the piece. Nice flow of ink.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's another painful write, love's floating in the piece but the pain... ! The pain's too surviving in the write in you. Anybody who does love always get some hurt once a time it's a piece and i got the feel of it, that's what i got from the piece. Nice flow of ink.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very heartfelt and emotional.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bravo. You did well, I think your better than what your "about you" gives you credit for. Hopefully things are better for you now :D.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

speaks to the soul

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad, soulful words, beautifully done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Even though sad poem, I like the wordings and your picturising so lovely. my best wishes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very touching :')

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh so sad. It's quite powerful in it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What an impact.
Good write.
Although the bird, il était un peu cliché


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, falling...something we all wish to do. We all want to fall in our times when we feel worthless and torn. Sometimes, it's okay to fall...other times, it's time for us to catch ourselves. Sometimes, no one can catch us and other times, someone can.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sugar and Spice

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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