I love you

I love you

A Poem by Sugar and Spice

I have never felt this way before. 
You're a drug a have to take. 
I can't stop thinking about you, 
Its maddening feeling this way. 
If only I was brave enough, 
If only I was strong. 
To ask you if you see me at all. 
If only my heart was whole,
 If only this was it. 
The love I feel as true enough, 
But tell me do you love me?

© 2011 Sugar and Spice


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That is such a beautiful Poem ... I know that feeling so well :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very relatable write, I can feel your emotions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Everyone feels this sometime in your life. It scares the person at the mere thought of letting the other know that you love them. Beautifully written.
"To ask if you see me at all." Love this line. Keep it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Sugar and Spice

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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