Forgotten

I miss you like mad, please don't let it come to this

Its hard to remember the days before these

The ones full of happiness, of laughter with no tears 

Those days I look back on and wish it was now

But mostly I wish you'd never forgotten

Forgotten the way you used to laugh

Forgotten the way you used to love me

Worst of all you've forgotten me

Now the demons you saved me from are back

The demons that mark their attack

The lines of red all over my skin

The darkness that you used to scare away has come back

You promised you'd never go

You promised we'd be together forever

All I wish now is that I had never met you

I wish I was the one who could forget

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Some deep "aches" of your fluffy heart arisen by the shades of such "forgotten" words. I find much pain in your stuffs. . .some kinda emotional attack you do ov`r the readers heart with such deep insights. Keep it up! ;)

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Another pouring from the heart:)

[Horizons]

It's a write made in the memory of someone with whom you loved much from heart. It's a painful, loving, caring but heartfelt piece of peace. You've said much in few words. Well written poem.

[Kelli Anderson]

I really liked this poem, it says a lot. There are a lot of truth in the words. I can relate.
This was well written.

[Rob Santana]

Ugh I know how you feel. You've expressed yourself well in tihs piece, good job.

[B-poet]

Interesting take on loving the wrong person at a particular point in a young person's life. Heartbreaks come and go unfortunately in life. It's best to experience them early so they won't be so devastating later in life. Nice job. :)

[Albyaino]

The raw emotion within this poem is very piercing, it pierces through the veil that the majority of us hold over our eyes to obscure the real world. It's very good. :)

[Greg J muscroft Poet]

Touching, sincere, honest, a little similar to my sensitive material I would say

[Kat Kills]

I feel the emotion you put into this.

the last line did you mean to write forget?