Sweetness

A poem for my wife emily which will be what comes out at first attempt with no backspacing. A purity of feeling comes from immediate impulse.

You who brings such precious feeling

Understood with no remorse leaves heart reeling

From once to now forever from then

I rejoice,count blessing,and so we begin

To look at the face of this woman endeared

From broken heart beating absolved of all feared

Who then do i seek for aid to this mortal woe?

My friend my family my lover my solace she makes so

But how may you ask to achieve such perfection?

Who would she be to achieve such vehement affection?

If what you wish is to hear my tale

Such stories of beauty and wonder of this jewel i shall now unveil

her hair is that of angelic evanescence

Fading from the light with a radiant essence

Her smile is evident of the perfection exuding 

Such wonderous sounds of a laugh while eluding

If asked to decribe her beauty defined is my only answer

But the shame lies within the asker to have never seen her

My story is closing but my heart is still enamoured

I must get off the computer...in fear of my face being hammered!

Man she can be scary sometimes xD

Author's Note

This is a kind of poetry i like to call pure impulse. There are spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes everywhere probably but this is the purest form of romantic wordplay in my personal opinion. It is written for my wife Emily White who is now hounding me to get off the computer so she can bother me to read the poem :P

Reviews

[Tim White]

Oh God to be back in this moment...such a beautiful love WASTED by arrogance and spite. Three years ago I'm sure you'll NEVER read this not like of want you to after what I've been through. I'll admit it's my fault but I don't understand what happened to me...I'm looking back now I'm what went wrong a thousand times I'm sorry...a thousand times goodbye sweetness. See you in my dreams...I could have seen you next to me forever if I had opened my eyes

[Serenity Faith]

I love you so much! Oh my goodness that made me smile so. I'm glad I have you. I could search forever and never find someone like you again. Sometimes you make me wonder who the real writer is though, and that's not just coming from your scary wife ^_~