Falling Star

A poem inspired by a song and my own images of life. It goes veeeery deep if you look into it, and it has an interesting structure, see if you can figure it out. =]

 

Falling Star

Reaching through the deep tranquil silence,

to the parallel world for the powerful twinkle from your living eyes.

My terrified voice ceases to grasp you,

the distance a million times the span of my young and insignificant hand.

Drastic dreams are your speciality,

gliding innocently across the moonlit sky, keeping my future locked within you.

A thousand eyes stare star struck,

as what they witness cannot be amended by their glowing portraits in the space world.

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I wish to catch you,

lucky star?

Author's Note

*Good friends are like stars. You don't always see them, but you know they're always there.*

Reviews

[Legion]

Nice little read. And yes, they are. Worded brilliantly. Good work.

[James K. Blaylock]

I truly enjoyed this wonderful piece, friends do shine at those perfect times.

jkb

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A nice approach to a wonderful theme.