Imperfections

Imperfections

A Poem by Emily
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This one is pretty self-explanatory.

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It was her wrists.
They were beautiful.
They were like a porcelain doll's.
But they were cracked, broken.
Imperfect.

And then there was his wrists.
They were clean. They were perfect.
They were a symbol of what she wanted to be.

Imperfect but eternally happy. <3

© 2013 Emily


Author's Note

Emily
Be nice. c: I write this late last night when I couldn't sleep.

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I enjoyed the poem. I like how two opposite made a perfection. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark and poignant. Great writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw, so sad but sweet. We all have imperfections, but that's perfectly fine because our imperfections are what makes us unique.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another good poem Emily very deep messages here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very short but with a serious message, great write :) You seem to write a lot at night when you can't sleep, exactly like me lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: perfect, imperfect, happy, wrists, broken, dolls, porcelain, him, her, beautiful, clean, glass, symbol

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Emily
Emily

Greensboro, NC



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