Lost in the Milky Way

Explore my body, like gazing into the midnight sky

Lovingly caress me so that my worries float away

Hold my hand, tell me everything is okay

Tell me over and over again that you are there for me and will stay

Be the twinkling star shining brightly in my heart

Please don’t disappear like a shooting star

You are the love of my life, and how I desire every touching quality of you to stay

Stay with me forever and always, each and every day

Reviews

[Lost, n'MT]

A very enjoyable romantic piece, and filled with such honesty from what I perceive to be a kind innocent heart. The few piece of yours have been alluring and filled with so move love and romance. This piece has been my favorite so far, but I definitely look forward more to your blunt adorable honesty and expression. I mean that with all due to respect, I really enjoyed this piece and can relate to it on a personal. Thank you for bringing me back to happier place just from reading this.

[Emily]

Thank you for your kind thoughts. I appreciate your review.

[Jibey]

I think the shooting star is inevitable! You are such a romantic.... loving the impossible dream

[ZVIGENI]

It is beautiful. well done

[Emily]

Thanks :) That means a lot!

[Phillip Francis]

This is really good. You are in the moment with this person and convey what you're feeling beautifully. Well done. Keep writing.

[Emily]

Thank you so much for your sweet comment :)