cry

Cry all you want,

your tears will never hurt me

after every thing you have done,

everything you said.

You have put me through way to much,

Now just leave

dont turn around,

dont say im sorry,

just leave my hear in the cold forest

all by myself

while i cry.

 

 

Emily

Reviews

[poetickeys]

I love the strength shown in this piece, and the ending shows how showing emotion isn't always a sign of weakness and vulnerability
I am also very new to this site and would greatly appreciate any time spent on reviewing my first and only piece. Thank you and keep up the good writing!

[jess foreman]

good x

[Lexi]

great poem exactly how i feel

[emily rose]

my bad i meant to write leave me hear not my hear