Creating a Fairytale

Creating a Fairytale

A Poem by Theo Ratcliffe

I thought I was Rapunzel,


With my long hair that was too short to reach the ground.


Stuck in a tower of isolation.


I wished to be Snow White.


So I could bite an apple and fall into an endless sleep.


But instead I hid in my empty castle.


Away from the world outside the walls.


Hallucinations from sleepless nights causing me to see talking tea cups.


Tearing the wallpaper off with each breakdown.


I played Cinderella.


Hiding behind a mask,


Pretending to be someone else while I searched for something I'd never find.


But


When that clock struck twelve and my glass shoe shattered.


My only escape was the little pill served on a silver platter.

© 2017 Theo Ratcliffe


Author's Note

Theo Ratcliffe
Ignore grammar and spelling problems. This is a rough draft so let me know what you think.

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This is creative and unique. I really liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is beautifully creative. Each reader can twist this poem to suit their own perspective and I think that is amazing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Theo Ratcliffe

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!
tangled - Rapunzel,
Cinderella
wow !! you took me to a complete different world on fairy tales along with your extremely captivating imagination.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Theo Ratcliffe

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on January 31, 2017
Last Updated on February 21, 2017
Tags: Fairytales, Cinderella, SnowWhite, Rapunzel, Beast, Pills, Depression, isolation

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Theo Ratcliffe
Theo Ratcliffe

Ontario, Canada



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A poem records emotions and moods that lie beyond normal language, that can only be patched together and hinted at metaphorically. - Diane Ackerman more..

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