Water is the most beautiful element in this world, the refreshment, the reflective beauty of the colors of the Sun and sky, the wet feeling, the soothing warmth, the trickle on the skin. What does rain smell like? It reminds me of sweet vanilla in a coffe mug, a bowl of chicken noodle soup, a pumpkin pie, or even a hot chocolate toasted marsh mellow. Explicit writing
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Water is truly a lovely element, your right it reflects everything beautiful in this world as its ow.. read moreWater is truly a lovely element, your right it reflects everything beautiful in this world as its own. I think rain has a very earthy smell,a dirty but clean scent that awakens your senses and encourages you to become one with the earth. I absolutely love writing poems like these, its nice to reflect on the world around us isn't it.
7 Years Ago
I have a story, titled Reflection if you wish to read. It entails around water itself, specifically .. read moreI have a story, titled Reflection if you wish to read. It entails around water itself, specifically rain. Its based off the water cycle, condensation, precipitation, evaporation. I hope you catch the cycles, its hidden within the story, but I'm sure you will catch each stage.
Beautiful sharing of imagery and experiences. You fill the spaces with magic...:).......................
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much Sami. I hoped that was what would come through to the reader, your review is muc.. read moreThank you very much Sami. I hoped that was what would come through to the reader, your review is much appreciated!
I like your subject matter. It's simple but a lot to go off on the majesty of rain. I find it a nice picturesque piece, exemplifying the beauty that comes with rain. nice job
Thoughtful, yet enigmatic. It's a very wonderful, observational kind of piece with a sense of mystery only the writer would know. I like it a lot and I think you should keep up with the free verse poem writing. It suits your being well. Snaps!
Hello, Young Poetess! : )
It's only Richard, come to read and review this marvelously beautiful and soothing work from the depths of your gentle heart and soul.
As a teacher of poetry, I can easily perceive that this Free Verse piece shows great promise, Emily, with its vivid expressions of imagery and spiritual-like atmosphere any Nature lover would drool-over, including Me! : )
My teacher's eye spots a good deal that would help this piece become the wondrously virtual little masterpiece it deserves to be, and if you're willing, permissible, and flexible enough, I will message you with an instructive illustration of what I mean.
If not, I love it anyway … hugs 'n thankful blessings to you for sharing your lovely spirit and keen potential, Emily! ⁓ Richard
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Wow thank you very very much Richard, for your vivid and constructive review, I very much appreciate.. read moreWow thank you very very much Richard, for your vivid and constructive review, I very much appreciate it. Your free to message me anytime, I would love to find out more!
8 Years Ago
You are so very welcome, Emily! : )
Thank you for the trust … I'll be with you in a moment.. read moreYou are so very welcome, Emily! : )
Thank you for the trust … I'll be with you in a moment.
Hello, my name is Emily i'm 19years old and simply just want to share my writing with the world. I have a strong love for writing about nature and the world around me. All the beautiful things it has .. more..