How is it conceivable?

Love recently has been a big inspiration in my life :)

How is it conceivable,
That you were more than capable
Of unearthing components of my soul
To occupy and satisfy?

I was wholly unaware
that those hollow parts were even there,
but alas, you have taken me by surprise.

Love had no definition
until, into my life, you drifted,
just as naive and unaware as I.

And now as we lie here tangled,
I praise my almighty maker
for placing you into my life.

Reviews

[David Scott]

It is not conceivable, this mind of God. We would never have dreamed of the gifts He has given us. The best gift He saved to crown creation when He made Eve and in doing so gave human kind sexual love. I'm so glad you have found this inspiration! You did a fine job with the write Emily!

[Emily Feret]

Yes, love is such a powerful thing. Who knows why certain people are put in our paths, just know that they are supposed to be! Thank you!

[Onku Ghosh]

Concise and lovely!!!! ''How is it conceivable/ that you were more than capable/ of unearthing components of my soul/" --great lines. Good work.

[Emily Feret]

how sweet thank you so much!!

[DCT ponderings]

I was wholly unaware
that those hollow parts were even there,
but alas, you have taken me by surprise.

Great poem!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe, this was a heartfelt piece. It was just so cute! I can relate to those feelings cause that's how I feel about the guy I like now. Thank you for sharing.

[Emily Feret]

Yay for being in a good relationship!

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Yes! I hope you are too!

[Emily Feret]

Well what do you think inspired this! :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

True lol

[TL Boehm]

I was wholly unaware
that those hollow parts were even there,
but alas, you have taken me by surprise.

Love had no definition
until, into my life, you drifted,
just as naive and unaware as I.

these two verses are especially wonderful

[Emily Feret]

Thank you for your kind words

[Larry Dyson]

short sweet and definitly you ...unglittered...soft statement but bold

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much!

[Dean]

How could the loved one be anything but appreciated, from reading this?

[Emily Feret]

What a compliment! Thank you!

[Dean]

de nada
I am finding it fun to have discovered you

[Frieda P]

Very sweet, there's a understated innocence about this love poem. Very much enjoyed.

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much for reading!

[Frieda P]

My pleasure. :-)

[Pete Langley]

First love is the best love, untainted. Enjoy it. It CAN last a lifetime, if you`re lucky, sweetheart. This is a sweet and uplifting poem, Emily. P.

[Emily Feret]

If you are lucky enough to find it, don't let go!

[beautiful dreamer]

i see that! very sweet and good!

[Emily Feret]

:)

[beautiful dreamer]

:D