Mine

Mine

A Poem by Emily Feret
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This is for the contest about writing a poem that reflects who you are. I like to think I am an individual, but am I?

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I walk each day, one foot in front of the other, on pavement that has already been claimed
And into buildings, already named
I day dream of things that already exist
I sing songs that have already been written
Living a life of completely unoriginal ideals

But, when my life leads me to utter distress
I take out my pen and start to undress
A piece of writing that, although made of words that have been around a very long time,
is something that is nothing but completely mine.


© 2013 Emily Feret


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"But, when my life leads me to utter distress
I take out my pen and start to undress"
The above lines are amazing. A very good way to describe create thoughts and words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

As Always, thank you!



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I day dream of things that already exist
I sing songs that have already been written
Living a life of completely unoriginal ideals
That is some good poetry...:0

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Thank you so so much Sami! :) I always appreciate a compliment about my writing :) And thank you so .. read more
Yes,it's original and exclusively yours.
Could you replace 'undress' by 'address' or by other relevant words that may rhyme with it?

Posted 11 Years Ago



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