Lover's Eyes

I think it's very possible to see something one way, and then glance upon that very same thing, and see something completely different than what you saw before.

Where once only shadows stood
The sun now blares her glow
Where drought once claimed the land
Only beautiful roses now grow
And it is possible my mind has shifter
To see familiar sights
With a different point of view
But I find life much more beautiful
Since I have fallen in love with you

Reviews

[Rahul]

I find life much more beautiful
Since I have fallen in love with you
this;s too Romantic one, lovey write and i loved your this poem again :)

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much!

[Acucena G.]

that's true , when we are in love everything is perfect , I like the way you describe it from before to after , and its true and natural , is it based on your life ? Spectacular work

[Emily Feret]

Yes! Everything I write comes from something I have experienced. Thank you for your review

[Acucena G.]

ypu are welcome

[Pollai]

Really smooth. Felt a sense of happiness from the optimistic imagery. Really nice :)

[Emily Feret]

Thank You

[Dean]

Thank heaven for that, eh?

Line 5... I think you mean "shifted."

[Emily Feret]

yes it is meant to be shifted! :)

[David Scott]

Ah... I just have to smile at the simplicity and purity of this poem. It feels so easy and fun. I want to sing a lilting tune and it feels familiar too... Very nice.

[Jack...]

This is a love poem indeed, so beautiful are your words that find me this day. Nicely done.

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much for reading!

[Jack...]

You are very welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. When we are content with life. Life can seem more beautiful and good. No weakness in the amazing poem. I had to read again.
Coyote

[Emily Feret]

Wow, what a joy to have you review my poetry coyote! Thank you so so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a very good Poet. We can learn from each other. Sites like this one. Allow us to read all kinds of poetry. No-one is the same. Thank you for sharing your word.

[Emily Feret]

thank you so much! Yes, I have come to really enjoy this site and all it has to offer

[beautiful dreamer]

oh wow! this is beautiful! loved it!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you so much for reading!

[beautiful dreamer]

you are welcome!

[Jayden Ireton]

What a beautiful work of art. My only queston while reading was is that supposed to be shifter or did she mean shifted? Love creates such great art. Thank you for this poem.

[Emily Feret]

it was supposed to be shifted! Thank you for reading :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, things look different when we are in love...very nice poem
in third line would reverse "drought once" to "once drought" to match first line.

and did you mean "shifted" in fifth line?

[Emily Feret]

yes I did and your right, I think once drought would definitely make the poem flow a little more!