I think it's very possible to see something one way, and then glance upon that very same thing, and see something completely different than what you saw before.
Where once only shadows stood The sun now blares her glow Where drought once claimed the land Only beautiful roses now grow And it is possible my mind has shifter To see familiar sights With a different point of view But I find life much more beautiful Since I have fallen in love with you
that's true , when we are in love everything is perfect , I like the way you describe it from before to after , and its true and natural , is it based on your life ? Spectacular work
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Yes! Everything I write comes from something I have experienced. Thank you for your review
Ah... I just have to smile at the simplicity and purity of this poem. It feels so easy and fun. I want to sing a lilting tune and it feels familiar too... Very nice.
Wow, what a joy to have you review my poetry coyote! Thank you so so much!
11 Years Ago
You are a very good Poet. We can learn from each other. Sites like this one. Allow us to read all ki.. read moreYou are a very good Poet. We can learn from each other. Sites like this one. Allow us to read all kinds of poetry. No-one is the same. Thank you for sharing your word.
11 Years Ago
thank you so much! Yes, I have come to really enjoy this site and all it has to offer
What a beautiful work of art. My only queston while reading was is that supposed to be shifter or did she mean shifted? Love creates such great art. Thank you for this poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
it was supposed to be shifted! Thank you for reading :)
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