Lover's Eyes

Lover's Eyes

A Poem by Emily Feret
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I think it's very possible to see something one way, and then glance upon that very same thing, and see something completely different than what you saw before.

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Where once only shadows stood
The sun now blares her glow
Where drought once claimed the land
Only beautiful roses now grow
And it is possible my mind has shifter
To see familiar sights
With a different point of view
But I find life much more beautiful
Since I have fallen in love with you

© 2013 Emily Feret


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I find life much more beautiful
Since I have fallen in love with you
this;s too Romantic one, lovey write and i loved your this poem again :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
that's true , when we are in love everything is perfect , I like the way you describe it from before to after , and its true and natural , is it based on your life ? Spectacular work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Yes! Everything I write comes from something I have experienced. Thank you for your review
Acucena G.

11 Years Ago

ypu are welcome
Really smooth. Felt a sense of happiness from the optimistic imagery. Really nice :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Thank You
Thank heaven for that, eh?

Line 5... I think you mean "shifted."




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

yes it is meant to be shifted! :)
Ah... I just have to smile at the simplicity and purity of this poem. It feels so easy and fun. I want to sing a lilting tune and it feels familiar too... Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a love poem indeed, so beautiful are your words that find me this day. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading!
Jack...

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome
I like the poem. When we are content with life. Life can seem more beautiful and good. No weakness in the amazing poem. I had to read again.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Wow, what a joy to have you review my poetry coyote! Thank you so so much!
Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

You are a very good Poet. We can learn from each other. Sites like this one. Allow us to read all ki.. read more
Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

thank you so much! Yes, I have come to really enjoy this site and all it has to offer
oh wow! this is beautiful! loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading!
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

you are welcome!
What a beautiful work of art. My only queston while reading was is that supposed to be shifter or did she mean shifted? Love creates such great art. Thank you for this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

it was supposed to be shifted! Thank you for reading :)
yes, things look different when we are in love...very nice poem
in third line would reverse "drought once" to "once drought" to match first line.

and did you mean "shifted" in fifth line?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily Feret

11 Years Ago

yes I did and your right, I think once drought would definitely make the poem flow a little more!

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