Goodnight

I have always been fascinated by stars. And I have always been mad about love.

Will thou love me when the nights grow dark,
With no constellations to guide our way?

Will thou love me when the stars all fall?
Sit back, and hold my hand,
And stay up to count them all?

I will make a wish
On all that catch my eye
That thou will stay and love me
As we watch the falling sky.

And if my wish be granted,
What a fantastic final sight.
I will count the falling stars,
And kiss you a hundred times
Goodnight.

Reviews

[Megara]

wonderful:)

[DogDrawler]

I love it! Thank you very much!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you guys so much for reading!!!

[Megara]

any time:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this so romantic...the stars just are synonymous with romance aren't they?

i have also always been mad about love..but often it has made me mad (in the insane kind of light)

nicely written piece.

jacob

[Emily Feret]

love can do many things! Good and bad! I appreciate you taking the time to not only read my piece but to give me your review. I appreciate your time!

[Sami Khalil]

Romance in its simplicity . Well written and sweet...:)

[Emily Feret]

As always dear reader, thank you for tuning in :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. I'll be visting from nw and then...:)

[zainul]

So romantic and lovely piece!

[Emily Feret]

Thank you for reading!

[zainul]

You are always welcome.
Hope to read more works of you.

[Celeste21]

Love the old time feel of this piece, and the images of two lovers laying under a night sky.

[Emily Feret]

nothing quite like laying under the stars

[Androglossia]

Very cute and heartwarming:) This reminds me of some other nights here in the tropics where the sky becomes an endless canopy of fireflies.

[Emily Feret]

well a night sky at the tropics sounds like the definition of romantic!

[Amy Azra Dean]

This poem reminds me of Romeo and Juliet talking to each other, a good read :)

[Emily Feret]

thank you for taking the time to read it :)