Wondering

Wondering

A Poem by Duckey

You yell at me
Loud and angry
Your voice full of venom
Your fists clenched by your sides

You yell and yell
You tell me you hate me
That you need more space 
That you can't handle me anymore

I stand there wondering what I've done

You yell louder
And throw insults at my face
Daggers to my chest
With every words

I stand there wondering what I've done

You turn your back 
And tell me "just leave" 
Then you open the door and say
And "don't come back" 

I leave, wondering what I've done

A week passes
And you ask me to talk
You tell me you're sorry 
And I ask you 

What did i even do? 

But you wont tell me
And you get up and leave
The door slamming in my face 
Tears running down my cheeks as

I stand there, wondering what I've done 

© 2014 Duckey


Author's Note

Duckey
Just a note, don't imagine this as a guy, because it's written about a girl, just for future reference :)

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I stand there wondering what I've done

"You turn your back
And tell me "just leave"
Then you open the door and say
And "don't come back"

I leave, wondering what I've done"

A lot to glean and learn when relationships go south. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow!! Very deep..I loved it..

Posted 10 Years Ago


I stand there wondering what I've done

"You turn your back
And tell me "just leave"
Then you open the door and say
And "don't come back"

I leave, wondering what I've done"

A lot to glean and learn when relationships go south. Thank you for sharing...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Duckey
Duckey

Perth , Australia



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Hi! My name is Emily, I am from Australia and i write a lot of sad poetry, and sometimes short stories. I have loved reading ever since i was little, and now as i have gotten older i have learnt to lo.. more..

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