Firefly

Firefly

With your colors so bold

And your presence so bright 

You drove away the shadows 

Of the monsters in the night 

You drove away the fear

Of the dark and what it hides

Of the people and the places

And the shadows in our minds

You showed me all the ways

To mend a broken heart

What i thought was the finish line

You showed me was the start 

Reviews

[BlankCypher]

I really like this! Especially since Fireflies happen to be one of my most favourite creatures ^_^

It's succinct and blends together really nicely!
Great poem! ^_^

[Duckey]

Oh thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it :) xx

[BlankCypher]

No problem at all! Keep them coming ^_^ xx

[Duckey]

:) I write a lot so i shouldn't have a problem with that! :) Thanks so much for reading my work it means a lot

[BlankCypher]

Well I am glad! Anytime ^_^

[Duckey]

:) xx I am glad

[ThackeryBinx]

wow that was very clever. Especially this part-

"You drove away the fear
Of the dark and what it hides"

That part hit the right note. It's my fav part of the whole. The whole thing is great.

[Duckey]

Oh thank you so much! I really like that part as well :3 Its one of the favorite pieces of poetry i have written, and then only piece i have written about the person its based on, which is also nice :)

[MomzillaNC]

This is as lovely as all those little dancing points of light on Summer nights.

[Duckey]

Awww thankyou

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.