What scares you?

What scares you?

A Poem by Duckey

Why is it you're crying? 
What is it you fear? 
I hear the voices ask me
They ask why i'm upset
why tears wont stop running
down my pale cheeks 
why i haven't left my bed 
but i don't know
I just am
and it wont stop 
the tears won't stop
and now i'm shaking
they say to me
"It's okay you can tell me"
but there is no way of saying 
"tell you what?" 
without sounding
like a sarcastic a*****e
without sounding
like you're hiding something
without sounding
like every word you say
pains you
burns your tongue
breaks your heart 

© 2014 Duckey


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Once again, another amazing piece. Keep going like this and you're gonna go far my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Duckey

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much :3 You are far too kind honestly. I am glad you enjoy my poetry
Hello Duckey,

You know, some of the best things about reviewing other's work, is that someday I'll stumble upon a jem. A Jem. And this, is one such moment. The main thing that strikes me is how much I can relate to this. These are the very emotions I've been trying to pen down since time immoral. Plus, its a poem! What more can a tormented soul ask for?

Re-gathering feels,
Shogun



Posted 10 Years Ago


Duckey

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much :) It means a lot to me that you enjoyed it and can relate to it. I find i writ.. read more

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Duckey
Duckey

Perth , Australia



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Hi! My name is Emily, I am from Australia and i write a lot of sad poetry, and sometimes short stories. I have loved reading ever since i was little, and now as i have gotten older i have learnt to lo.. more..

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