I Knew Something Wasn't RightA Story by Monochrome PersonI havent really read over this again to pick out parts to be fixed so I'm hoping someone may have some good criticism for this piece :D As usual, hope you enjoy!Everyday.
I saw you almost everyday. It’d start in the morning when you’d drive past me
freezing in the autumn morning’s crisp and chilly air, listening to the same
old song every time. I’d always wait, knowing at some point around 8:10AM that
white van would speed around the corner and I’d get a wave and a beaming smile
from behind the fogged up windows. I’d see the happiness on your face and my
day was already brighter. Only a few hours after the morning flurry of a hello
would I see you again. And I could not wait to see you. Those
days at the park, where we laughed and talked and just spent time together, too
coy to admit our feelings but from the looks we secretly gave each other, we
knew there was something between us. An invisible electricity every time we
came close to touching but too nervous to do anything, not even reach out to
hold each others hand. We were shy, but we were happy in each other’s presence.
You
were so beautiful to me. The way you became nervous and fiddled with the back
of your dark hair and toyed thoughtlessly with objects to which you pretended
to be so deeply amused with. The way your cheeks turned pink as you looked away
when I discovered the pen marked onto your grey jeans with my name. You were so
peculiar and I was curious to unearth every piece of information about you.
Your favourite band, your pets, your past. Accidentally I became so deeply
involved in you. Time
passed and we began to bloom, became open to one another. You’d share your
secrets and I shared mine. We became closer like magnets to one another, but
never close enough, something was blocking us from falling completely for one
another. I knew you cared about me a lot, time and time again you ran to my
aid, dropped everything for me, I felt so loved, so wanted. I adored you for
that, but my heart was unwilling to let me fall freely for you, I was held up
by an invisible string of my past, I couldn't cut it it from me, I was still
attached by this thin thread of guilt. Another
month, and you kissed me. But I was scared. I was still 15 and you were so much
older. What did I do with all these emotions, all this confusion, all these
unmade decisions. I couldn't cope with the pressure of our evolving
relationship, for I wasn't even certain of my own feelings. Time
flew past again with not much change, things became dull as winter approached,
the colour left the park in which we had spent so many days, it all became
bleak. I
knew something wasn’t right, that day during class in May when you messaged me.
Something had changed in you, you were quiet, not your usual shy quiet I was
used to, but a quietness I knew meant something was being unsaid. It was that
day that I’ll never forget. The day I truly realised how I felt, how I had felt
all along but had never known until that moment. When you told me your feelings
had slipped. It became a blur of apologies and ignored texts about another
girl. I just didn’t want to hear it. Not then when I knew I had fallen for you,
when my string had finally been cut. Two
months. Two months since you called it
off. Since I became heart broken. Time did not exist, it was only arguments,
lonely nights and tear stained pillows. Listening to the same old song every
time. But you didn't care. I felt unwanted, like I never meant anything. Those
dark days when I only existed as a cold, hollow shell of a human. Running it
all over and over like a broken record stuck on repeat in my head. Picking and
sifting, trying to figure out what went wrong, leading myself to believe it was
my fault. I had never felt so much regret and guilt for anything in my life.
But it was too late. Two
years. Its been two years and the rope you tied around me is only just
beginning to loosen, but I'm not ready to let go yet. Days come and go and you float through my mind, when I
remember that park, when I hear that song, when a white van drives by. You are everywhere,
but you are not with me anymore. The years since have just slipped away, I
think of you less and less as time goes on, but you will never be gone. I often
wonder what it would be like if we never ended, if there was still a you and me.
I like to imagine we would still be happy, that you’d still smile the way you
used to and those butterflies would fill my stomach as I grew excited just
seeing you. But I guess I will never know what could have happened. You let it
go too easily. Time faded and so did we. © 2013 Monochrome PersonAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorMonochrome PersonAboutIm not much of a writer, I dont see myself as the extremely talented or creative type but I'm doing this as something to get into and improve for personal enjoyment, also as a hobby and way to vent! M.. more..Writing
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