Amber's Epitaph

In my english class we had to write an epitaph so i did one for my vampyre obsessed friend Amber =]

Here lies Amber,

the girl who thought she was a vampyre.

Dracula she emulated.

Sunlight she truely hated.

All night she ran around,

biting everyone she found.

three incidents and lawsuits later,

she found herself in the pen,

serving five to ten.

Then one night

she had the misfortune to bite.

someone who ended her life.

Thats why here lies Amber,

the girl who thought she was a vampyre.

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Nice. Too bad she wasn't a vampyre, she could rise up again.

[Tina Kline]

Nice vampire poem. Like the way you wrote it, kind of amusing and tragic at the same time. Well done.

[felweed]

Hey, I think I know this girl, she sounds like someone I know in the state of NY, or maybe its just the state of my mind

[. o O (Deepest_Thoughts..]

Haha! I love it but you so totally know I AM a vampyre. [: