bereft

my beggared heart

     wandered

               naked roads

impoverished

     of moon shine

deprived

     of sun's gift

bereaved

          of Muse

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It wouldn't have been so bad if you'd not been impoverished of moonshine. I could stand a swig myself. hahaha You know I'm just ribbing ya? I like this except it's sad. Give that bereaved Muse a drink...You know the Bible says "Give strong drink to him who is about to perish and wine to those who are of heavy hearts"...there's a verse that doesn't get read much on Sunday from the pulpit!

[Lilly Negoi]

nothingness redefined...:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love the trail of word pearls through the dusk~

[Sel Whiteley]

Wow, what a sullen empiness, no muse or light, in a void beyond day and night, a total depersonalization of the persona. This is so succinct and direct, really focusing on that absense, stunning.