on Ed Hart's Spring

some days

the wind is too rough,

and spring rains

overwhelm,

 

suns still shine,

 

and the glories

of a new morning

raise spirits anew

 

nectar is sweetest

when shared

Reviews

[...]

. you and Mr. Ed Hart are all heart and all soul ... magicians as humans and magicians as poets ... there is such beauty in your words and his ... both of you are the original miracles of WC ...

[lostboy]

sometimes its scary..sometimes its sweet..its always real.

[Kerry O'Connor]

A lovely poem, for a lovely man, who never fails to raise the spirit - as have you with these words.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Following the honeybees bzzzzzzzzzzzz. Lovely.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

a wonderful poem, Emily. Yes, it is sweetest when shared.

Chloe

[Tommy]

Oh glorious day, tastes like honeysuckle.
“I can see clearly now”

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[OT]

ha indeed! "nectar is sweetest when shared" - his poems do inspire - you took the train of thought and moulded it well as always!

[Ladysue]

oh yes, remarkable what life that seasons can breathe...lovely.....

[Desert Dreamer]

Oh yes! Shared nectar is the best and the suns warmth is felt best after the rain and wind.

[paul]

great descriptions, glorious ending