joyous song
A Poem by
Emily B
Walking down blooming sidewalks
in the early morning,
I wondered aloud a little.
What do you reckon
that mockingbird's singin' about?
The trees didn't answer.
The squirrels paid no attention.
You only smiled a little.
And later, I wondered,
if maybe,
that mockingbird had just never
seen bluer skies.
One of these days,
we'll have to ask him.
© 2011 Emily B
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Ah is is wonderful to experience a sort of euphoria from life itself....admiring its beauty and splendor... I so enjoy the double connotations derived from your work...
I'm listening, Emily...and I do believe I hear it.... so spectacular...as always...
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Interesting. Mockingbirds are one of my favorite birds :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Interesting. Mockingbirds are one of my favorite birds :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I adore mockingbirds, and I adore this poem. The simple blissfulness one experiences in the warm sunlight and stunning beauty of nature is incredibly captured in this poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I adore mockingbirds, and I adore this poem. The simple blissfulness one experiences in the warm sunlight and stunning beauty of nature is incredibly captured in this poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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you told me that there was a poem in those mocking birds you couldnt get out of your head... and poof, here it is. great flow, great sense of "being" in this poem. i will have to bookmark this one, enjoyed it very much.
zig
Posted 13 Years Ago
you told me that there was a poem in those mocking birds you couldnt get out of your head... and poof, here it is. great flow, great sense of "being" in this poem. i will have to bookmark this one, enjoyed it very much.
zig
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
dont you love her? mary oliver. she's amazing.
as is this. the noticing. the being attentive. the wondering.
the last stanza, though, (a humble editorial) i think it's not the right one.
Posted 13 Years Ago
dont you love her? mary oliver. she's amazing.
as is this. the noticing. the being attentive. the wondering.
the last stanza, though, (a humble editorial) i think it's not the right one.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
love this
Posted 13 Years Ago
love this
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow. i don't know how u do these things with words, but i love it.
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow. i don't know how u do these things with words, but i love it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ah is is wonderful to experience a sort of euphoria from life itself....admiring its beauty and splendor... I so enjoy the double connotations derived from your work...
I'm listening, Emily...and I do believe I hear it.... so spectacular...as always...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ah is is wonderful to experience a sort of euphoria from life itself....admiring its beauty and splendor... I so enjoy the double connotations derived from your work...
I'm listening, Emily...and I do believe I hear it.... so spectacular...as always...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
someone sent me to Mary Oliver's work . . . wow:
Mockingbirds
This morning
two mockingbirds
in the green field
were spinning and tossing
the white ribbons
of their songs
into the air.
I had nothing
better to do
than listen.
I mean this
seriously.
In Greece,
a long time ago,
an old couple
opened their door
to two strangers
who were,
it soon appeared,
not men at all,
but gods.
It is my favorite story--
how the old couple
had almost nothing to give
but their willingness
to be attentive--
but for this alone
the gods loved them
and blessed them--
when they rose
out of their mortal bodies,
like a million particles of water
from a fountain,
the light
swept into all the corners
of the cottage,
and the old couple,
shaken with understanding,
bowed down--
but still they asked for nothing
but the difficult life
which they had already.
And the gods smiled, as they vanished,
clapping their great wings.
Wherever it was
I was supposed to be
this morning--
whatever it was I said
I would be doing--
I was standing
at the edge of the field--
I was hurrying
through my own soul,
opening its dark doors--
I was leaning out;
I was listening.
Copyright © 1994 by The Atlantic Monthly Company. All rights reserved. The Atlantic Monthly; February 1994; Mockingbirds; Volume 273, No. 2; page 80. Online Source
Posted 13 Years Ago
someone sent me to Mary Oliver's work . . . wow:
Mockingbirds
This morning
two mockingbirds
in the green field
were spinning and tossing
the white ribbons
of their songs
into the air.
I had nothing
better to do
than listen.
I mean this
seriously.
In Greece,
a long time ago,
an old couple
opened their door
to two strangers
who were,
it soon appeared,
not men at all,
but gods.
It is my favorite story--
how the old couple
had almost nothing to give
but their willingness
to be attentive--
but for this alone
the gods loved them
and blessed them--
when they rose
out of their mortal bodies,
like a million particles of water
from a fountain,
the light
swept into all the corners
of the cottage,
and the old couple,
shaken with understanding,
bowed down--
but still they asked for nothing
but the difficult life
which they had already.
And the gods smiled, as they vanished,
clapping their great wings.
Wherever it was
I was supposed to be
this morning--
whatever it was I said
I would be doing--
I was standing
at the edge of the field--
I was hurrying
through my own soul,
opening its dark doors--
I was leaning out;
I was listening.
Copyright © 1994 by The Atlantic Monthly Company. All rights reserved. The Atlantic Monthly; February 1994; Mockingbirds; Volume 273, No. 2; page 80. Online Source
this made me smile today more than anyone will ever know~ each word a morsel for a woman momentsrily open to the world~beautiful~
Posted 13 Years Ago
this made me smile today more than anyone will ever know~ each word a morsel for a woman momentsrily open to the world~beautiful~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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