I love the loose structure in this! It works very well. It just flows wonderfully, and effortlessly. You've really captured the essence of what we try to do with language: just hope that what we say rings true, is relevant, and can serve some purpose. You've made a point here, and I wonder if it was inadvertant, that we need not use flowery language and frills to say something true and meaningful. Words should always be used to communicate with a reader or listener on a meaningful, personal level. If they meet that end, then beauty and sophistication will follow. Superb.
Oh, yes how words inspire and sometimes answer questions...important ones... You have become one of my greatest inspirations, Emily... What a lovely piece, filled with insight and wisdom.... Love the last line....
Beautiful words Emily. I write poetry because it's the only way I have a conversation with myself. And out of that bursts forth wisdom I did not know I possessed. Poetry to me is the philosophy of life and this poem of yours is an anodyne for the soul.
I have noticed you do have that ability, to draw one to express their heart, or at least you have on me at times. It is kind of strange how someone we have never met, other than to read their words can pluck at our heart's strings making us share the tune of our lives. There has been a few times your words have created conversation in this house surrounded by the Rockies, and you being way down South with the Appalachians. Maybe you are not that far away after all, and the world really is small. I'll ante up to that...
to the Lost Boys
I am no Wendy;
but my voice brings you back to me.
And you sit around my feet,
anxious for a story
or a kiss.
Listening to my words
spinning adventures,
like so much g.. more..