still

don't read too much into it

I am still waiting

for another shoe

to fall

 

Because loving you

was always too

easy

 

And the sun still lingers

where you

smile

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

with the others, it's all play, like the mock violence in a matt dillon movie, as opposed to a documentary where real bodies are lying in the street...the difference being that one is real, and the other is not...so when it comes to real things, where real hearts are tested in the embrace of words, and flames that with the slightest breeze could burn homes to the ground, then indulging in the heat of flames is not play, and what could pass for the moment's fullness would turn to stark starvation, and nothing that is born in the tears of others could ever take flight and stay aloft; and further, though you may serve, it be by your leave, and not because you are born to it, my lady

[Ruth]

Such an impact from a concise, well written poem love:)
Each line literally compliments the next!
I love this piece of art, wonderfully vivid with emotion!
xx

[What happened to simple..]

this is gorgeous, so simple yet so heartfelt

[Dana Kathryn]

This is Beautiful...It speaks of true love and it is short yet pure and full of emotional bliss :)

[paul]

i'm still waiting too.

[Moonflower]

Amazing~

[alan peter kelly]

i feel the warmth in your alliteration...lovely...exquisite...

[shythatway]

it's good. having things like this to come back to.. thanks, em

[...]

. when real is surreal ... it's this beautiful ... and did i say that i love how love loiters in the beautiful corridors of your mind ... and how you always catch it red-handed? ... :) ...

[Ladysue]

Your words are simple, yet bring life and meaning within...