back to the beginning

In the ancient days

we wandered through God's acres

nearer the sublime

than we ever imagined

 

your smile

was heaven to me

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

andrew zimmern on his show, "Bizarre Foods", always describes fresh water fish as tasting
of the waters and mud they came from. This poem feels like the Kentucky mud of grace
and residential, home-spun ingratiation of Gods purpose that it came from: to be human and
humble and to acknowledge the human and humble in others...

wonderful poem Ms/ Burns.. dana

[Jeff Loquist]

there is definitely something a little more inside of you...

[Wondering Mind]

I feel as if the memory is living you and not the other way round..

[Tony]

Nearer to heaven, this is just exquisite. Knowing we were once there and remembering how beautiful it all was. It would be nice to find it again.

[...]

. and this smile of yours is heaven to me ... through all that time that you have lived and loved ... and been divine ... how i wish i could've been there and said it all the time ... your words are divine ... and that's only because you are sublime ... :) ...

[raining]

the shiny bright smile of another who has lived in Heaven, the Creators love is a tree is a brook, is remembering one another as children. I recall this as you do, as we all have a right to do , by being our being

[James Paulin]

Thoughts return of Moms reassuring smile and Dads confident grin. Every day was an adventure. Just where I went with the sentiment.

[J. Hampton]

Oh yes I love this ...
" on earth as it is in Heaven "

[Ladysue]

Absolutely beautiful!

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Beautiful.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Emily you always write so breathtakingly..as if all the love you have lived and found have been put into your words.