back to the beginning

In the ancient days

we wandered through God's acres

nearer the sublime

than we ever imagined

 

your smile

was heaven to me

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

andrew zimmern on his show, "Bizarre Foods", always describes fresh water fish as tasting
of the waters and mud they came from. This poem feels like the Kentucky mud of grace
and residential, home-spun ingratiation of Gods purpose that it came from: to be human and
humble and to acknowledge the human and humble in others...

wonderful poem Ms/ Burns.. dana

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Your words are angel's whispering:)

[Dane Osborne]

Great vastness present in such brevity. A hard trick to do for many but you pull it off masterfully well. Excellent write.

[Khaaki]

Exceptionally pure and engrossing... A few lines but oceans of wisdom...

[Ru Banerjee]

Such a pristine poem of pure,unperturbed love, untouched by worldly sins.

[Jasmine]

succinct simplicity rounded off perfectly.

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Very open, sweet and deep. A short little piece which brings many thoughts and ideas to mind.

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this poem was heaven to me..simple yet deep

[Nothing Personal]

WOW! Awestruck. the simplicity lies in the beauty of simple things and beauty indeed is simple..A wonderful poem

[An Ordinary Woman]

I see that wonderful pic of your son wearing his cowboy hat & smiling that sheepish little smile. That's what your words make me think of today. The beauty is it will lend a different thought tomorrow and each time after that.

Lovely, Emily.