digging deep

digging deep

A Poem by Emily B

those times when

my roots stretch deep

in barren soil

 

searching

 

I don't know

if you could guess

the urgency

of my need

 

the clouds whisper

how soon

until hope

rains

 

and I look

skyward

again

© 2010 Emily B


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... a mesmerising mood ... exquisite and enchanting poetry ... an intense instinct ... a perplexing pause ... a quest ... a hope ... anticipation ... aspiration ... a melting moment ... oh ... this is so beautiful ... it simmers softly ... (highest rating) ...

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This is so lovely, so gentle, so complete. And "hopeful". Even when all seems lost we instinctively look up to our only help. What a gift you have!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now that sent a shiver through me.

"the clouds whisper
how soon
until hope
rains"

Your roots digging ... searching for hope. GOD I so feel that way sometimes. Like my status said (might still say) "Sometimes the Green Mile seems so long."

Posted 14 Years Ago


how would clouds resist raining ...its azure eyes looking upwards...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

don't desire until you see the whites of their eyes...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought this was clever. Love the last verse...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

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Emily B

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