... a mesmerising mood ... exquisite and enchanting poetry ... an intense instinct ... a perplexing pause ... a quest ... a hope ... anticipation ... aspiration ... a melting moment ... oh ... this is so beautiful ... it simmers softly ... (highest rating) ...
The urgency seems to get more entice as the clock of life tics . Least that's how I see it. Looking skyward there is hope always and the reason being because we still see the skies, the moon and every scent that abounds. Adore your gentle nature and easy rhythm so relaxing when I need it the most
this is so so great for many reasons. one reason is that there is a delicate balance between the metaphors and the emotions uncovered here. i love how you incorporated nature into your poem. It could have so many meanings and there is genius in it's ambiguity. I have a special love for trees. I will send you one of mine that u may not have read. Well done! such a treat for me to read:)
This image is so inspiring, and it compels me to write something of my own, along these lines, but I wont. I'll let it turn over in my mind and cultivate, compost all that has come before it because your poem has done enough, it has awoken something, that sense of having roots, extending deeply to many ends but needing that water, that nourishment and longing for it to come, which I suspect it did, eventually, if it wasn't already, always there.
There's something about tree's. I love them, especially drawing them in the winter.
Really enjoyed this. It's a nice feeling to be reading this in such a relaxed state of mind, with no urgency about me. Bravo, thanks for sharing.
to the Lost Boys
I am no Wendy;
but my voice brings you back to me.
And you sit around my feet,
anxious for a story
or a kiss.
Listening to my words
spinning adventures,
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