new adventures

for Sahar

I never thought

to possess blue eyes

before.

 

Never imagined

a world not colored

by shining brown.

 

Never thought

to be one who reflects

two azure lakes.

 

Imagine my pleasure

to glimpse through pools

that reflect your blue skies.

 

Amazed

at the adventures

of a conjuring mind.

Author's Note

maybe it makes no sense

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'new adventures'
Emily B
The reflection of color or feeling. My husband has hazel eyes. I felt that they were the most beautiful thing I'd ever seen when we met. I still do. Color does relay emotion and even feelings. Nature reveals meaning too. Your poem of nature and imagination just was an inspiring dip in a lovely pool. Thanks. I read your poem 'to melt' in the past and thought I'd check this one out when I saw your review on Einstein noodle's page.
Bless you,
Kathy

[Emily B]

Thank you. I wrote this after a conversation with a young friend many years ago. Her imagination was wondrous.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

That does sound really nice. Others have the ability to share so much. I have two grandaughters that inspire me. One newly married and one in college.
Kathy

[Emily B]

That's truly wonderful

[Ed Hart]

blue eyes! what's all this stuff about blue eyes? now it's my brown eyes cryin' in the rain...bummers

[Tracie Skarbo]

This is wonderful ... what a unique way of saying you are looking into someone elses life through their words on the page... you say so much with so little words. Amazing talent you possess!

[Stacey Watts]

this was very beautiful. I think this piece flowed and spoke of a neat poetic journey.

[Alicante lullaby]

ohhh world's blue eyes...you are nothing but love...pure,pure love...

[Jibey]

'Conjuring mind' indeed... How lovely that you capture such pleasure and reflect it back...

[cest la vie]

Makes perfect sense.. she thinks you have blue eyes..
i may be wrong..either way, lovely writing..