don't judge yet

don't judge yet

A Poem by Emily B
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found it in a comment I left for someone a while back, and I'm just tired enough to post it

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how to polish the tarnished soul (in three easy steps)


First, take liberal dunkings in public fountains. The dingy soul must first wash away worries about what small-minded strangers think. It occurs to me that skinny dipping with a friend might do just as well.

Second, the surest thing to bring new light to a tarnished soul is doses of clear, blue skies. And sunshine. Flying is next to godliness. Or dreaming of flying.

Third, sprinkle smiles. They make us shine from the inside out. Plus, those crotchety, small-minded folks wonder what we're up to . . .

or some other foolishness, don't know what's got into me today
 

© 2009 Emily B


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What got into you was probably the sword of perfection....I would only add that you use an inflatable kayak in the public fountain so that when the police are chasing you down you can scream out, " MY GOD they're using a time machine!!"... as you go around in circles unable to loose them.
The sky ...well....it lies between you and moonlit star..soaking in their energy to rain upon you and a smile is something you must give daily or it just makes baby Jesus cry....lol...Sorry my attempt at a smile.
I loved this. It is that unsung sound through a tree fall of forest with no one around

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Amen, beautiful. xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily,

We are all prone to blindness at some point of our lives or another, Sometimes it is us who rush to judgements so I wonder why we get disappointed when others judge us.

I have been feeling down lately because of those 'small-minded strangers', who are dying to arrive at a chance where I might make a mistake, so that they would play the mature sophisticated preachers.

Washing away worries in a fountain sounds refreshing. And I can clearly see the blue skies you mentioned. They are gorgious and spirit-lifting. And the idea of sprinkling smiles is not new, but still lovely. However, I must learn to smile again myself before infecting others with that glee!

I am officially a fan of yours. My spirit is in need of what you write. I want o know more through your gentle instructions. Thank you for sharing,.

-Rain.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

i am still learning, just thankful for the chance to learn
ahhhh! yay!! I've been thinking about this..Ivy, aka hedra said something about stripping these conceptions..I'll msg you the story...but I love this...you're taking (y)our ingrained fears and planting insolent, gorgeous flowers in their place...love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I always knew you were gifted with special knowledge that the rest of us didn't have.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pax
such cleverness ~ it made me smile and think... haha!
awesome! ~ i like the skinny dipping part :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

thank you
Old musings that still apply..oh well, is it 'yet' yet? Clever write Emily.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

:) i never know
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Haha now I don't feel so bad, I never know either. ;-)
Emily B

11 Years Ago

sometimes they just grow wings and fly away
Hahaa, I loved this Emily especially number three, this is an old one you pulled up, and it still works beautifully, oh my...noticing Perdition's reference to time machine here...that's pretty messed up in light of my fragile state of mind that it would be a featured review on this. I miss you Monkey man, kiss my a*s.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

usually it is in those other clothes, from other times :)
Corset

11 Years Ago

what do you mean? In those other clothes from those other times? ...that you go camping in them?
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Emily B

11 Years Ago

involved in living history, i have clothes for the 18th century and the 1860s . . . i get around a l.. read more
I'll take this foolishness any day. This piece made me smiling thinking of doing exactly waht you suggested. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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...chunky dunking in my case. Ha!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Hmm. My old neighbours used to give me weird looks for lying in the snapshot pool with my clothes on after the kids had gone to bed.. (They were just envious, I'm sure). I haven't tested this neighbourhood yet, so there's a thought.

So much wisdom in this :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Emily B

11 Years Ago

weird looks are just an incentive for me :)
shythatway

11 Years Ago

I think that's a healthy approach. And I meant to write snapset pool, not snapshot (hopefully..)

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