Trepidation

another old one

Resolute

stood the mountain laurel

on the little hill.

Steadfast

held her leaves of green

to the noble sun--

and came along the little Bee

curious and bold.

His whispered words

of Trembling pulses

Yielded forth the prize.

 

Reviews

[I, Rene]

This IS very Emily like, it reminds me of a movie, an english man went up a hill and came down a mountain, I was so impressed by that true story made for movie, Like I am by this beautiful poem. To stand resolute in ones convictions, is a beautiful thing, so stand resolute while the bee whispers, well that's nature calling :)

[Crowley]

Fantastic....in form and fashion. This lifted my spirit and made me smile, carefully crafted and wonderful write. Nice work.

[Dezaraye]

I love how simple this is and how peaceful your words made me feel.

[tshigg]

Creates a beautiful picture and feeling. Great poem!

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful little piece; I love your descriptions. Your use of language itself reflects the scene beautifully. Great job. :)

-Coral-

[Jeff Loquist]

plants are naturally resolute...unfortunately, we are not

[Ladysue]

A stunning read..a natural moment expressed so beautifully...

[Wondering Mind]

honey sweet words of natures never ending beauty

[Valentine]

Isn't it funny how much value to the world of agriculture a litttle beee is..we are having a shortage of them,,,probably what they spray on the crops..Nice write..lola nd God bless..Kathie

[Robin]

this is just naturally wonderful , the emotion you have set is perfect

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

gorgeous moment captured of natural harmony~ a lyrical jewel~ intoxicating~