This IS very Emily like, it reminds me of a movie, an english man went up a hill and came down a mountain, I was so impressed by that true story made for movie, Like I am by this beautiful poem. To stand resolute in ones convictions, is a beautiful thing, so stand resolute while the bee whispers, well that's nature calling :)
Every word of this is perfect. Always wanted the talent of flattering nature with poetry, the way you've done here. Reflecting is maybe a better word than flattering. This is a pretty piece, but not the patronising kind of 'pretty'; it's just very pleasant to read and envisage so the reader tries to savour each line. Those uppercase letters are an intriguing touch. I like that Bee is capitalised (Proper )
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so many of my favorite words are in this poem: resolute, steadfast, noble, curious and bold, trembling... and you've used them like van gogh colors in this exquisite painting.
Beautiful, peaceful and true .. such beautiful creatures, bees; and how they. need protection because apart from tending all things growing, we wouldn't have poetry like this.
to the Lost Boys
I am no Wendy;
but my voice brings you back to me.
And you sit around my feet,
anxious for a story
or a kiss.
Listening to my words
spinning adventures,
like so much g.. more..