This IS very Emily like, it reminds me of a movie, an english man went up a hill and came down a mountain, I was so impressed by that true story made for movie, Like I am by this beautiful poem. To stand resolute in ones convictions, is a beautiful thing, so stand resolute while the bee whispers, well that's nature calling :)
This IS very Emily like, it reminds me of a movie, an english man went up a hill and came down a mountain, I was so impressed by that true story made for movie, Like I am by this beautiful poem. To stand resolute in ones convictions, is a beautiful thing, so stand resolute while the bee whispers, well that's nature calling :)
A poem full of fine words, mountain laurel is great, as is little Bee, an affectionate, intimate expression, I like noble sun too. Enjoyed this, fine write.
You manage to put so much into a few short lines. I like the importance you've given to various words - it breaks the rhythm when you are reading to yourself, and makes it that much more. To me, anyway :)
This reminds me much of another poetess named Emily, who's writing I admire... (admission of which is the highest form of icaros13 style praise)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
i wanted to be her when i was a little girl, she was my childood idol
12 Years Ago
I thought I was the only little kid that idolized poets... My brother read "Miniver Cheevy" to me an.. read moreI thought I was the only little kid that idolized poets... My brother read "Miniver Cheevy" to me and I became a E. A. Robinson disciple... "Amaryllis" is one of my all time ultimate favorites.
12 Years Ago
oh, Miniver Cheevy was a favorite . . . and Edgar Lee Masters people portraits
12 Years Ago
I haven't read much Edgar Lee Masters... I'll have to check him out. I love the classics.
FIRST! i love the title, ok now to actually read the poem. I've never been a fan of capitalized words within the poem, like "Trembling" I just don't think that word is important enough to warrent so. I do like "trembling pulses" very nie tactle and auditory image
Your words these days capture something unique in almost every line. They follow your thoughts precisely and leave an indelible mark on those of us who read them.
to the Lost Boys
I am no Wendy;
but my voice brings you back to me.
And you sit around my feet,
anxious for a story
or a kiss.
Listening to my words
spinning adventures,
like so much g.. more..