seduced

inspired by Jibey

your words

ran away with me

this morning

 

maybe it was the fog

creeping in through open windows

til I surrendered

 

maybe my imagination

was seized strongest

by the first words I met on waking

 

maybe I dreamed you

only to wake and hear you whisper

stay close

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love it...simple language and strongly emotive .. and is written to be taken on more than one level .. those first thoughts and impressions on waking ..or just before...can have such a strong impact on at least the first few hours of the day ..if not more .. the space between dreams and the "real" world can be stretched sometimes ..and oh how the imaginations can get ones full attention ... i love the title and i love the poem ..and how they work together to create a sensual thread .. so glad we have met.
E.

[Emily B]

thank you so much

[Tate Morgan]

Sweet the nectar we do taste in love

[BABSIE BEE]

Fabulous work. Thanks soooo much for sharing. Will be reading more.
Babsie Bee xx

[An Ordinary Woman]

This is an "oh, oh, oh!" poem! I love those poems that are able to reach out and grab us, commanding our full attention. When someones words touch us like that it's soooo special. I'll favorite this one!

[Tate Morgan]

Emilly i loved this

[Tony]

Oh yes!! this is one of those special poems that stir the heart with a tenderness that not too many can express, words we all keep in our subconscious, waiting for someone to whisper them to us. It is a clear expression of seductiveness. This is, "Love Me Tender" all over again. Beautiful!! Emily. Maybe Everything.

Tony

[4ammonologues]

This piece is, i find, seducing itself. You say so much with so little words. It has a certain air of comfort and assurance in it.

[PianoandPage]

i think the thing i liked most about this was the sort of quiet confidence running through it. the way the fog, the words, the dream... all sort of insubstantial and yet they carry you, influence you, and seduce you.

you write without wasting a single syllable.

[Doctor JKC]

"stay close"

The most beautiful of all words.

Love your work/play,
Jack

[Touché Armada]

Thats so pretty. I'm just going to wander off with this now, go back to bed and keep it as a snuggle bear.

[Jibey]

Maybe something...