seduced

inspired by Jibey

your words

ran away with me

this morning

 

maybe it was the fog

creeping in through open windows

til I surrendered

 

maybe my imagination

was seized strongest

by the first words I met on waking

 

maybe I dreamed you

only to wake and hear you whisper

stay close

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

love it...simple language and strongly emotive .. and is written to be taken on more than one level .. those first thoughts and impressions on waking ..or just before...can have such a strong impact on at least the first few hours of the day ..if not more .. the space between dreams and the "real" world can be stretched sometimes ..and oh how the imaginations can get ones full attention ... i love the title and i love the poem ..and how they work together to create a sensual thread .. so glad we have met.
E.

[Emily B]

thank you so much

[gombeggar]

well done...short words with deep imagery

[Naomi Jacobson]

Sends a strong message in a short, few words. Good job!

[Hello, Goodbye]

brilliant in its intricate brevity

[J. Hampton]

playfuly ...ambiguous..perhaps dreamy : )

[The Analog Kid]

Very alluring and spiritual. Maybe something:)

[Tkess]

Our minds are a powerful thing. It can play tricks on us. We can be anything in our dreams, but upon waking up we are the same as when we went to bed. However, those dreams can alter our being and be the catalyst of change we need. A very invocative write.

[not on my dime]

Romantically awesome.
Should you stay asleep, or wake up?

[Robin]

how the first moments of a day can shape the rest ... and the power of words , the definition of seduction .

[Christina May Shanaberg]

This is a very beautiful poem. It's more like a love note! Wonderfilled images in your writing, here.