Yes, Emily, this was an absolute pleasure to write and read...when I got to "lines blurring", the magic of it just sort of washed over me in waves...
It's like I said when I first sent it to you..your essence was already flowing through the words.
From our earlier collaberations, etc..
it was nice dancing w/ you. A joy unparalleled by winning the lottery or anything material...
I'm gonna post my part as a separate piece w/ a link to yours, like the first, except the opposite.
This is a really fine poem, a Wordsworthian homage to nature, but also with small,fine intimate details, a big picture that ends with hands and smiles which make it personal and endearing. Lots to enjoy here, like ghost crabs and beach-birds,really like the name Audobon, names of places in America are somehow magical.
Great poem.
I am still dumbfounded by migration. Surely it is more spiritual than actual.
Hump back whales traveling six thousand miles to warm waters, birds
flying in their migration to open vistas and warmer breezes, or the great
leather back turtle traveling tens of thousands of miles going seemingly
no where at all (leaving warm climates to go to other warm climates to
lay their eggs.) I am a simple person. Should I conclude that all that I
dont understand is spiritual? hder astounding work.
. of course you are ... this poem is a miracle ... utterly stunning and inspiring work ... oh, how i love these words ... and all the images ... this poem of sighs and smiles shall always live in my heart ... thank you for writing magic spells in words ... there are at least a million of them in this piece ... absolutely miraculous work ... loved, loved, loved it ...
Life is a magic mystery that so many miss out on by not having an artist nature or a vision for things that are right in front of their eyes..So much to see if we only open our eyes to it..Kathie
to the Lost Boys
I am no Wendy;
but my voice brings you back to me.
And you sit around my feet,
anxious for a story
or a kiss.
Listening to my words
spinning adventures,
like so much g.. more..