Someday

I will no longer
beg
for scraps of affection
like a starving
bird.
I already
have
everything I need
inside me.

I don't need you
to make me whole.
I won't ask
for kind words
or fond
remembrances.
Someday,
when I'm far away
You'll miss me.

Author's Note

It was lonely and wanted read. In no way does it indicate my present state of mind. Or maybe . . .

Reviews

[BrightEyes]

there are those people in the world who horde their affection like it has an end; never realizing that the more you give affection away, the more that moves in to bless your life. I've seen it most with children and parents who barely give them a glance; oh those hungry eyes for a soul so undernourished; not receiving the love it needs; the comfort and security. It makes me sad; and for that reason, this made me sad. A great write though - I did love that your MC here had enough and knew their worth was not wrapped up in what another was willing to give.

[Christel Grady]

I absolutely adore this piece! I feel like this a lot, and then I remind myself that there is no comfort found outside of myself. Only then can I realize that I truly am happy. : )

Thank you,
Christel

[ANNA]

Very emotional piece and so true to what I have felt at one time
A strong poem call go so far but this has more then just a good write. You gave the views a look inside the eyes of your words. Very beautiful ..Hope to read more of your poetry

Much lov n respect
Anna

[The Tao of Bri]

This was sooo full of emotion and fervor! I loved the melancholy truth and sheer naked power of this. God, have I felt this before or what..this is so amplified and describes it soo well!

[Laura Pruett]

Nicely written. A poem that can give strength and solidification to those in need. Good job.