Dancing with the Moon part I

Under the bright moon, my heart sings for thee.

Heart that slept in me

Woke up from love

Love coming from you

You held my hand 

To dance under the stars

Under this beautiful moonlight

You made me spin with grace

I stopped to see your face

Little colors of brown I see

Seeing you, I am free

Around the colorful lights

Filled with wonderful delights

Every breath we take,

a step we shall make

The sound of music so fine

Peaceful and beautiful, what a find!

Then we both paused

This sweet love, why was this caused?

You took my heart from my chest

Love you gave, you couldn't rest

And yet I am here, smiling with your heart

Author's Note

I only wrote this because I felt like writing it. Yeah.. felt. :P

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

A gorgeous write! Reading this certainly made me feel happy, and I thought that you did really in capturing that feeling of happiness and timelessness and carefree...ness, haha. The scene that you constructed was full of fun and spontaneity, and I think that it's something that everyone should experience at some point in their lives. :) Your poem had such vivid and evocative imagery, and I especially liked the third to last stanza. Great work,
~PaperHearts

[Legendary]

very hopeful indeed... :D

[Tracie Skarbo]

very nice...this is hopeful and happy.

[Bette]

i like this Nice rhythm.

[Joe]

thisis good. it has nice rhythm and rhyme. good job

[Coyote Poetry]

The moon, time and someone you love. No better place to be. A beautiful poem of hope and happiness. A positive and hopeful poem. Thank you.
Coyote