Simple Day

Like the beautiful bloom of spring

Love started to bloom into a flower

Lost in the sounds of a gentle ring

Living like dancing in the rain shower

Painting on the empty little paper

Drawing the skies of a dreamer

Butterflies gazing around the garden

A heart like this surely can't harden

A little girl lost in her dreams

A little boy exploring anew

A pair of hands ready to reach

A pair of socks left on his bed

Sitting in a quiet and musical place

Filled with silent beats and a face

My, my, what a little surprise I see

A cute little puppy smiling with glee

Ready or not, here comes the test

Race with your other self and win!

Run to the mountain top, do your best

Roam around the hills after you've won

Close your eyes and sleep

And wake up in your dream

Don't let the monster eat you

Let your soul be its wonderful self

Reviews

[alesuriko]

This is quite beautiful. Full of sweet and innocent imagery and a great rhythm. Brings me back to childhood, the good ole days haha, I sound old. But those were good times. And you describe this so efficiently and exemplify the innocence in these settings... quite lovely. The last stanza was funny, with the monsters, but also insightful. Well done.

[PaperHearts]

Aww, how cute! I liked the innocence and simplicity of this poem, particularly in your descriptions at the start. This had a great flow to it, and I liked how it evolved as your poem progressed. The second stanza was my favourite! A lovely write,
~PaperHearts

[maryjaneuy]

nice work. there's a great flow in your poem. :)
love your rhymes. :)

[Legendary]

oh, this is absolutely wonderful. :) The flow of the poem was so natural it beautifies the whole scene. Nice job. :)

[Abhinav]

Liked this poem,in fact,loved it......you ended it very very well

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. It has a nice image and rhyme to it. I especially like the third stanza(?) with the repition of lines. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. You can describe life with a gentle and kind feel in your words. I like the story and the feeling in your poem. Complet poem was very good. I like the ending a lot.
Coyote