Sleep in Peace, Rest in Slumber

It's basically something about sleep and calmness. I can keep it true. Don't trust in me, but just see it in its invisible state so that you can believe in it.

Hush now my dear

Don't cry, don't weep

Rest thy head

Close thy eyes

Let the calmness of night

Take you to peace

Rest forever inside

Never wake from this sleep

Forget all the pain and anxiety

Ignore Life's harsh desires

Give time for thyself

Give nothing thy mind

Thee who suffered from hell

When the sun will set,

And night will rise,

Thy mind will stay in Heaven

Let the clouds take wing

Let it soar to the skies

And let it stay there

Until you're ready to go 

Please, try to forget that confusion

If not, stay in thy calmest state

Be calm, meditate, think nothing

And everything will be normal again

Author's Note

Don't trust in me, but just see it in its invisible state so that you can believe in it.

Reviews

[Legendary]

This is a rather calming problem. Although, I do not agree about thee "think nothing" phrase since each and everyone of us has problems and they pile up the space in our mind and this makes me forget all the minor problems but this can be good though. Meditating so that you can calm yourself. This poem has a little bit of a flaw in the third stanza at the last line. Try to change that but anyways, this is a really good poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about calmness.

-General

[Raivenne]

I like this. Especially these lines:

"Let the clouds take wing
Let it soar to the skies
And let it stay there
Until you're ready to go "

[Nicolo Marcelo]

Well I am not into formal writing when it comes to giving out my comments but uhm, this made me shed tears and I have no idea why... Such a great writer, the new generation just makes me smile! ^_^ Keep it up and keep on expressing yourself! :) I loved it, just from reading it, I felt like i am hearing a musical lullaby... Marvelous! ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your words. They were like meditation. Easy and peaceful to grasp and understand. A excellent poem.
Coyote