Where do we go after we die?

Where do we go after we die?

A Poem by Yani De Los Reyes
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Imagination was triggered.

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It's a question left unanswered
"Where do we go after we die?"
A lot have said their responses
Where DO we go after we die?

When I was born, I am here
When I was sad, it was clear
There was no end to the loneliness
Where do we go after we die?

There was no end to the pain
Trapped in forever punishments
What must become of this life?
Where do we go after we die?

The question left unanswered
The people answer randomly
The confusion struck many
Some giving the wrong philosophy

As many have responded,
Answers were mixed
This is what I answer,
We go somewhere when we die.

But it depends on the person 
Whether he should stand up again
One cannot expect death.

© 2010 Yani De Los Reyes


Author's Note

Yani De Los Reyes
A question that we all want to answer.

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Yes, it is true that this is a question our little minds want to answer because we certainly don't know what will happen in the future. This is indeed something we ought to think about because it is surely a mystery. People sometimes answer the question but give the wrong philosophy and answers and others share what they think about it but then it will lead to confusion because this question only needs the correct answer(s). This is a good poem, to be honest. It made me think so broadly. Good job! Keep up the good work. Let your poetic skills touch the minds of many.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes, it is true that this is a question our little minds want to answer because we certainly don't know what will happen in the future. This is indeed something we ought to think about because it is surely a mystery. People sometimes answer the question but give the wrong philosophy and answers and others share what they think about it but then it will lead to confusion because this question only needs the correct answer(s). This is a good poem, to be honest. It made me think so broadly. Good job! Keep up the good work. Let your poetic skills touch the minds of many.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My joke is when we died. There is a Cat sitting and judging us. In the old Middle East Cats were treated like God. I believe we must do our best to be kind. Help the people we can. Hope for something better. A excellent poem. A poem with no proper answer.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


well done a question i think about sometimes good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
this is really good. I ask the same question and never can come up with a clear answer. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Yani De Los Reyes
Yani De Los Reyes

Quezon City, National Capital Region, Philippines



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I'm a 12 year old girl turning 13 after 3 more months. I'm a person just like you. Ordinary yet special in the eyes of the Creator. Making Art is my passion and writing is one of my most favorites. An.. more..

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