Illusions

Illusions

A Poem by The Chimera
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Written on 11/26/08

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Robbed of power and majesty

Fooled to believe in futilty 

Taught to trust in what we see

Lies to blind us from reality

© 2008 The Chimera


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The Chimera
Ignore how short it is. Honest reviews please. :)

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short but deep... not bad

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is short, but I think it makes it very effective. I like the rhythm it seems to have while reading. It makes it flow very easily. I think the message is very clear and to the point. It's a powerful little piece, and making something have meaning with so few words is a challange so fantastic job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true, this is great short and to the point....Kim

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I write to discover myself. Frustrated, confused, and depressed about who I am, I am on a journey of self discovery. By living out another life through stories, and chewing on my emotions to write poe.. more..

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