Jake Wars: The New Girl
A Book by CrazedWriter
 Crystal Dymond never imagined her life changing so much at only seventeen years old.  © 2020 CrazedWriter
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I'm thinking about a title change, as well as trying to think of a good description for the story. Any ideas and suggestions are welcomed and appreciated!
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Hey, I noticed actual stories don't get a whole lot of traction on this site. /: But I wanted to let you know, you're writing is great! I was sad when the chapter ended already, haha. For a title change? Hmm... I know her name is Crystal... but her last name is Dymond! You don't have to use it, but the first thing that came in my mind was, 'Dymond In The Rough'. Lol, I know it's a little silly, but I really hope you keep writing. I like to write fanfiction for a game called Zelda too. Already, in the first chapter, I like Crystal and her dad a lot too. I really hope I get to see more from you.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Thanks so much! I'm actually going to type up the next chapter and post it here soon!
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4 Years Ago
Yay! Can’t wait! (:
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Hey, I noticed actual stories don't get a whole lot of traction on this site. /: But I wanted to let you know, you're writing is great! I was sad when the chapter ended already, haha. For a title change? Hmm... I know her name is Crystal... but her last name is Dymond! You don't have to use it, but the first thing that came in my mind was, 'Dymond In The Rough'. Lol, I know it's a little silly, but I really hope you keep writing. I like to write fanfiction for a game called Zelda too. Already, in the first chapter, I like Crystal and her dad a lot too. I really hope I get to see more from you.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Thanks so much! I'm actually going to type up the next chapter and post it here soon!
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4 Years Ago
Yay! Can’t wait! (:
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Added on October 2, 2020
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I enjoy reading and writing. Currently, my writing consists of mostly fanfiction, with a few originals. I also enjoy spending time outside whenever I can. more..
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