My Pain, Your Gain.

It Hurts again,

It's the worst pain.

The crimsons flowing from my vein,

It's running down the drain.

There's a bloodstain,

It's driving me insane.

My tears, like acid rain,

I can't explain.

I need to be hit by a train,

I need to turn off my brain.

It's just one big chain,

I can't restrain. 

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

How does your mind work to find rhyme when you are troubled in sadness? I wonder. I am amazed to read this, it is emotional.

[Em]

I literally just say random words out loud that rhyme with the word I have on my mind. Thanks again for all your kind reviews.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are a true poet, I wonder when you simply converse do your words rhyme or not 😄
It is my pleasure reading such heartfelt poetry, love it.

[Em]

Thanks I get it from one of my pops who went to WW2. I feel like I have to carry on his memory by writing poetry like he did.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are doing a great job. All the best, no need to mention thanks.

[Em]

You too. All the best with your writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much ☺

[Em]

All good no need to thank me, if anything i need to thank you for taking the time to review my poetry.

[Najam Us Saher]

I told you, no need to mention thanks, it is my pleasure reading such heart touching poetry :)

[Em]

:) You are so kind.

[Najam Us Saher]

And so are you :)

[Em]

Awwwww, thanks again. i hope to chat to you some more soon.

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, anytime.