Gone

My crimsons flowing.

I wonder if you know. 

It's overflowing.

I can't show.

I need to be going.

It's not slow.

You're so easy going.

This is the end of the show.

I need to get sowing.

Now do you feel low?

The crimsons slowing.

I'm gone though.

You keep growing.

But i really must go.

Don't stop showing,

Your bright glow.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

The repeating rhyme scheme is very pleasing to the ear; very soothing. The musicality, however, doesn't quite do it all that justice in certain areas. Fix the flow, you gain a gem. Well done!