Somewhere, Voice, Blood

I wanted to be somewhere

Other than here.

This place didn't want me.

Didn't need me.

My words are cut throat

And deadly.

You dare to cross them

Then that is your own fault.

 

I wish

Not to hear your voice.

It's like a buzzing in my ear.

I can't shake it away.

 

Ther is a line on my wrist.

It is bleeding.

The line is the color of a rose.

A beautiful, blood red.

I admire it.

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

i like the fact that it has a deep sadness to it but at the same time i feel hatred within the words, great job.

[.]

that's a dark morose tale...intense ending.

So morbid, so intense, so beautiful.

[No regret]

i loved it From the first line n perfect ending . Great !!!

[Mortricia]

I enjoy the thought of admiring blood.

[Caitlynxoxo]

oh man heavy stuff, but i liked this. It was short, yet very powerful in the subject you chose to write about. The ending was good, though it seems like it cut off too soon!! :) I was like, "WHAT?!?! Write more!!" lol anyways, thanks for posting!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo