No Pain, Hurt. Sorrow

Come into my castle

And forget your pain.

My castle is your paradise.

Your shelter.

You are safe

And the pain is gone.

Please don't hurt

I'm here to make it better.

Tonight

There wil be no pain.

No hurt.

No sorrow.

Reviews

[MiidniightSoul]

It's a really beautiful poem. It has a great flow, making the poem touching. Wonderful.

[Sam]

It's very beautiful. I can seriously ideantify with that kind of feeling.

[Buddhistboy73]

Great sentiment....:)
I love the idea of a strong building such as a castle to keep us all safe...good imagery here....
"There will be no pain..." love it...:)

[Caitlynxoxo]

"Tonight
There wil be no pain.
No hurt.
No sorrow."

I loved that ending; it was perfect! Fantastic poem, thanks for sharing!! :)

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Moonflower]

Beautiful~