Stressed Out

She needs to stop

Stressing me out.

I have done nothing wrong,

I have finished the bottle from under my bed.

So now, there is nothing.

I feel no pain,

Just worry.

I dson't understand

What is so bad about me?

I'm just a teenager

She needs to understand.

I will soon be gone

And I believe that she couldnt care any less.

She just doesn't seem

To want me here.

That's all I must say.

 

Reviews

[mischeif]

It's got a great rhyme, and flows really smoothly. It's full of emotion and has a very touching story line

[HappyTaylor]

This is really good it flows pretty good and it is really full of emotion! Good job!

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An emotional write, which for me always touches more...well done

[Onyx_Rayne]

There are a lot of emotions here; sadness, frustration, feeling misunderstood, wanting acceptance of who you are. I can feel every one of these emotions from reading this. At times, we all feel invisible, but it will always pass, eventually. We are all meant to be seen and understood and we all will be... I promise. Beautiful write, keep 'em coming :)

[Steve]

Very intense and sad too......i feel like i know this feeling very well. Thanks for expressing it.

[Poetic Beauty]

i think we have moments where we truly feel like no one cares and to me that is what this poem is saying. I have had many times in my life like this but I pick up and carry on. Great write and great way to express you feelings of lonelyness and sadness

[eli mercuree rue]

i agree with everyone else

life is better once you smoke a bowl and realize you control your life

live for no one
die happy

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Someday .. you realize that you stress yourself out. . because you care and the answer is not to care...but that is easy to pretend or say.. but deep down, the few who can do it ...are cursed as it is our humanity .. to care.. now...as for the stress it is a lot less when you..have an opinion that is independant..anyhow.. not to say..I've got the magic trick.. anyhow , good writing

[D. Pesek]

hmm, issues with your mother? as someone getting ready to leave home, I can see where you are coming from. we all get aggravated with over-protective and cautious parents, especially at this age. and putting ourselves in their shoes really only serves to make us vow to never be like them when we are parents. what I have come to do, it try to have more patience, although their means may seem skewed, at least parents generally have good intentions, deep down. turning to alcohol, especially at this age is not a good idea though. drinking for the sole reason of easing pain is an easy way to lead to further problems down the road. a most insightful read, thanks for sharing

[huntnteen]

We all feel this way to smaller degrees as we age. So very nice relate-able poem, and i hope you find a way to relax